https://youtu.be/N4ixcr0eZgE
I did not receive any negative criticism and it was like the first elevator pitch but I believe I can make my pitch more fluid. Overall, I did not change much in this final elevator pitch but I did try to be more fluid and cohesive.
Hi David.
ReplyDeleteGreat job in inviting the reader into your pitch. Some things that you could improve on in your pitch is to not be soo nervous when your presenting. Practicing a bit more on what your concept is can be helpful. Another thing to include is be more engaging in your audience when you are speaking. Moreover, a little background on yourself and why you chose this market is something to also consider when opening up to the audience. Overall I liked your concept, but be a bit more specific on what your target market is.
Kaitlin
Hey David,
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone else that your previous elevator pitches deserve little to no criticism. You continue to speak very smooth and you are able to get your product message across to your audience. I really enjoy the product and would be an active customer.